now u got the poteintial but it aint there with this mix....u gotta start simple cause all those effects werent workin for ya...gotta work on ur editing first...watch alot of dominos mixes or Mixtape lives mixes..or even mine to get an idea of how to edit....here is a link to my youtube page....good luck and hope u take this in a good way..nice try and keep goin at it....
http://www.youtube.com/user/Origa2