Old 05-31-2008, 11:07 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Monta (+Wilkin collab)

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better :)
text looks mad hot btw gj wilkin
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Old 05-31-2008, 11:55 PM   #2 (permalink)
 
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Re: Monta (+Wilkin collab)

Nice working with you dude .
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Old 06-01-2008, 01:09 AM   #3 (permalink)
 
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Re: Monta (+Wilkin collab)

DAmn..thats a pretty sexy wall...and damn right that text is hot...great kollab...
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Old 06-01-2008, 01:54 AM   #4 (permalink)
 
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Re: Monta (+Wilkin collab)

sick collab. i like it. Text is great IMO!
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Old 06-01-2008, 02:28 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Re: Monta (+Wilkin collab)

I love the colors and the background effects but overall composition holds this work down. Text mostly needs to have the informational purpose aswell as it just has to be properly placred to gain attention but not all of it. Your focal point should be the driving Monta Ellis, but right now he is clogged down by the background effects.

I think it could look better with a different text and Monta Ellis a lot higher than he is at the moment.

It's a great start in my opinion mostly thanks to the background and overall coloring, just some flaws that need to be addressed imo ;-)
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Old 06-01-2008, 06:07 AM   #6 (permalink)
 
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Looks really good imo, wouldn't change anything bout it, and yes the collab is better ;)
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Old 06-01-2008, 07:06 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Re: Monta (+Wilkin collab)

ROFL @ the credits at the bottom

"Wallpaper by vince_86 and Wilkin helped"

I've never seen that before :ROFL:

Nice wall but I'd change the lighting on his face because it doesn't make sense that his head would be brighter than the rest of his body without some sort of light source aiming straight at it.
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