lol thats almost exactly how my first wall turned out....Mine are better now, but i only like to take like an hour doin them unlike some people who take days
add more effects to the text
and see if you can black out that line down the middle so the side fades into the background
and maybe make the backgroud behind Fed black and white and make fed colourful
if you can figure out how to do that it will help you a lot