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07-06-2009, 05:10 PM
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This may be simple, but that's what I was going for.  Click for 1400x900. |
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07-06-2009, 05:19 PM
the pretty little poem is homo. the background is as plain/empty as it can get. you killed the lighting stroke i taught you. kobe's over sharpened and the light ball on the top left is cut off cut off partly when you view it at it's full size.
other than that it's your best wall. 10/10  
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07-06-2009, 05:21 PM
Its alright, Captain America.
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07-06-2009, 05:25 PM
awful lighting & text .
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07-06-2009, 07:31 PM
I like the idea, but the text could have been better, nonetheless, Good Job.
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07-06-2009, 08:48 PM
if you did that without looking in two minutes while having a seizure it still wouldnt be good .
ha nah man, its just really plain. the poem on the side is a good idea but horrible execution . the light is random and the bg is too plain. its really boring bro . Melo_Man  |
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07-06-2009, 11:43 PM
lmao at the poem. blend the text, literally looks like there was no effort made on it.
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07-07-2009, 12:15 AM
Damn do you guys not watch war movies? It's not a poem, it's the marine's creed except changed to basketball.
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07-07-2009, 12:26 AM
For you it's good. Don't take it the wrong way, but when you keep things simple, your work turns out better. So I do like it overall.
The only thing that confuses me is there are 5 light beams on the top. And at Kobe's feet, it seems to only be one light spot pointing towards the left. And there is only one shadow. That's literally impossible. I say fix the spotlight, add a couple more lighter shadows, and it'll look better. And maybe make the light beams visible near their source and then blend in as they get closer to kobe. Gotta keep physics involved otherwise it looks awkward to the viewer. ~Venom |
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