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10-25-2009, 11:09 AM

Made this for school its my first poster, dont really know how to make it a smooth transition between upper and lower half so i just did this with it. Suggestions pls on how to make the poster better?

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Re: Film Poster for school - 10-28-2009, 10:03 AM

well I have a few comment ...

poster theme is good I mean well organized but the writing type of u used is terrible..It's not fit the whole theme..

Another point is skulls...Why did u the margins? Your theme is ancient river of babylon..But why skulls.. It seems irrelated with the rest..

The effect u used in main characters is not good. I mean it should be like that.When a person or view look at the ''movie poster'', first that person can easily recognize that famous people.Honestly that time I couldn't.That's very important point in movie posters...

Simply, delete it skulls, and make main characters recognizable ... that's the way


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Re: Film Poster for school - 10-29-2009, 01:25 PM

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well I have a few comment ...

poster theme is good I mean well organized but the writing type of u used is terrible..It's not fit the whole theme..

Another point is skulls...Why did u the margins? Your theme is ancient river of babylon..But why skulls.. It seems irrelated with the rest..

The effect u used in main characters is not good. I mean it should be like that.When a person or view look at the ''movie poster'', first that person can easily recognize that famous people.Honestly that time I couldn't.That's very important point in movie posters...

Simply, delete it skulls, and make main characters recognizable ... that's the way
FINALLY TY FOR THE COMMENT!

Didnt had lessons about text yet so i had no idea. will get that next week. Ill will do everything you said and see what it looks like then. You have some good points but I thought it wouldnt really matter. Thank you



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