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11-07-2009, 05:22 AM
something after a very long time lol, go easy.
v1 http://usman77.deviantart.com/art/bu...sire-142784321 v2 http://usman77.deviantart.com/art/Bu...sire-142784426  ŠUsman
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11-07-2009, 06:08 AM
The flames on the shoe look too random,and also the "Jennings" text comes out too much compared to the "Brandon".But I completely understand you,since that's your first wall in a long time.
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11-07-2009, 12:22 PM
ehhh not feelin this at all
the flames look 2 fake and cut off, text is way too big, i dont like the text cuz its so big and bloaded err you can do better. 
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11-07-2009, 12:57 PM
Looks good for a comeback piece. I concur with the feedback they^ gave ya tho.
And v2 doesn't add anything IMHO. Quote:
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11-07-2009, 05:36 PM
yea i must say, very different from any of my styles, but thanks for the feedback guys, i'll try to get to my oldself, when i have a break from uni lol, anymore c+c?
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11-08-2009, 10:05 AM
I don't think it's too bad, I didn't like the picture too much, and I like lighter colors so I wasn't feeling the red too much.
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